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If I close my eyes, I can feel his skin beneath my fingers. His soft but tough skin that makes me want to sigh. I can even feel his fingers touching my skin. My cheek, my lips, my hips … its making my heart beat and my face flush, and his not even here. Whenever he touches me I can see the look in his eyes that tells me I’m beautiful. It’s the same when he sees me after time apart. His eyes light up and I’m absorbed in them. I can see what his thinking, and it tells me I’m beautiful. A smile that no-one else can see plays about his mouth when he looks at me. That smile is just for me. It tells me I’m beautiful. If I ignore the world I can hear his words whispering in my ear to tell me those small things that only lovers can know and they tell that I’m beautiful.

I open my eyes and the door in front of me. There he is, turning to look at me and he says:

“You’re beautiful.”
©2007-2009 ~elliaana
:iconelliaana:

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yeh, just a short piece i've done. crit is very welcome as i really didn't plan or think about it.

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:iconwilliamsward:
Lovely *

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"You've a good heart," she told him. "Sometimes that's enough to see you safe wherever you go." Then she shook her head. "But mostly, it's not."
:iconjaberwakii:
omg. i love it. its romanitic. the lack of a defined form makes it seem more impulsive and emmotional and raw. and love very often is those things. i can read this and relate. my boyfriend makes me feel this way.....

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we're all mad here! :headbang:
:iconelliaana:
yeh, this was about my boyfriend also ^^

thank you!! :D
:iconjaberwakii:
lmao. its a wonder how motivating they can be......and annoying.......

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we're all mad here! :headbang:
:iconelliaana:
indeed ... and they can both to the extremes. lol
:iconjaberwakii:
lol. its like dating dr lovey and mr please-kick-my-ass.

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we're all mad here! :headbang:
:iconelliaana:
haha, i totally agree. and mr please-kick-my-ass comes in many disguises
:iconjaberwakii:
lol. its like they WANT you too get mad at them and then its like "huh? i did that? really? oops. so baby, wanna....." *grrr* its simpler when you're single.... but mr lovey is the bomb and thats the one you live for.

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we're all mad here! :headbang:

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