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The touch of your hand
Upon my skin
So soft
It tells me I'm beautiful

The look in your eyes
When you look at me
So sweet
It tells me I'm beautiful

The words that you whisper
Into my ears
So soft
It tells me I'm beautiful

The silence of your soul
When we're together
So sweet
It tells me I'm beautiful

The kiss of your lips
Against my own
So soft
It tells me I'm beautiful

I'm beautiful
©2007-2009 ~elliaana
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Author's Comments

yeh, i wrote this on the bus this morning thinking about this [link] which i wrote last night

and i have no idea if this is the right section or not, cos i don't really do much poetry.

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:iconemochick-siobhan:
that's amazing! j'aime beaucoup!

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I believe in God, only I spell it, "nature."
~Frank Lloyd Wright
:iconjaberwakii:
again, amazingly done. i love the structure for this one and i love the pattern you use. it makes me love him more......

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we're all mad here! :headbang:
:iconelliaana:
merci :D and also for the fav
:iconelliaana:
^^ thank you very much, and for the fav also. :D
:iconjaberwakii:
np. your peice was one that i would enjoy reading multiple times.

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we're all mad here! :headbang:
:iconthebeautifulgeek:
Wow, good job! Nice everything!

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The Few, the Proud, the Geeks!
:iconjaberwakii:
:matrixfight:

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we're all mad here! :headbang:
:iconelliaana:
XD thank you!!! you make me very happy

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